Hook is pretty good, not a lot of changes or verses, and same story line. If you want to stand out don’t sound like all the others and be brave enough to have a different story line. In today’s mess we need to hear a positive message that tells us we can rise above and change what is happening; even if its in our own back yard.
Sorry if my comments are not in the regular vernacular but I don’t know how to express in it so have resorted to old fashioned English language, wish I did know cause I’d sound cooler but at 66 I’m used to not sounding “cool”.
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